I mentioned this first poem in last week’s post, as being unfinished. I am not entirely sure of it even now, but here it is, having gone through multiple alterations.
I prefer my poems to scan clearly, and I feel this one keeps tumbling over those boundaries into some confusion as to what I was trying to say. But I am calling quits on it now and will l…
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