A Sonnet for the Season
Really solid couplet opener. It summons the rest of the poem.
Thank you, Mark! The sky is so large here, and somehow I began thinking how rainbows and the Milky Way created the same sort of arc overhead...
It's amazing, isn't it.
I loved the lisp of the rabbit’s feet. So charming amidst all the pricklier images.
I don't think my reply got linked to your comment🤔, but if not, it's around here somewhere...
I got it, thanks.
"Pricklier images..." I like that! So many things have prickles here, but the rabbits are soft and quiet.
Such images! And your capture of the heat of a desert daytime with the cool in the evening is absolutely perfect. Beautiful work as always.
Really solid couplet opener. It summons the rest of the poem.
Thank you, Mark! The sky is so large here, and somehow I began thinking how rainbows and the Milky Way created the same sort of arc overhead...
It's amazing, isn't it.
I loved the lisp of the rabbit’s feet. So charming amidst all the pricklier images.
I don't think my reply got linked to your comment🤔, but if not, it's around here somewhere...
I got it, thanks.
"Pricklier images..." I like that! So many things have prickles here, but the rabbits are soft and quiet.
Such images! And your capture of the heat of a desert daytime with the cool in the evening is absolutely perfect. Beautiful work as always.