Year Upon Year
Excellent. A timely theme. Also, I'm so impressed with your consistent rhyming over such a long poem.
Thank you, Laurie! I love rhyming, and I find that for me it is largely a matter of simply getting my brain into the rhythm and flow of the lines.
"how strange that they think
they don’t dwell in our grasp"
I think this is a very fine poem and captures the "vanity of earthly greatness" so well. thank you
Excellent. A timely theme. Also, I'm so impressed with your consistent rhyming over such a long poem.
Thank you, Laurie! I love rhyming, and I find that for me it is largely a matter of simply getting my brain into the rhythm and flow of the lines.
"how strange that they think
they don’t dwell in our grasp"
I think this is a very fine poem and captures the "vanity of earthly greatness" so well. thank you