This poem began with the last new moon. I’m finishing it now as she is full, but I always find new moons particularly special.
Friendships
Here is twilight; night comes soon,
and in the west the moon descends,
and they are friends: dusk and the moon.
Tonight she’s just a silver lune
Dropped through the dusk as daylight ends
And falls to twilight; night comes soon.
Beyond the lune dusk’s simple tune
Is sung by Venus, quavers, blends,
For they are friends, she and the moon.
Across the dusk they’ve set a rune
For all to read; its spell extends
the sacred twilight. Night comes soon.
I read that sign from June to June
across the dusk. Does it perpend
that we are friends, I and the moon
And Venus? Darkness follows noon,
But we three love the dusk, we friends
amid the twilight. Night comes soon;
yes, we are friends, we and the moon.
This haiku is a sort of wondering about scale.
Pondering power,
three pale stars intersecting
our electric lines
I'm a total newbie to poetry, and this is only the second time I'e encountered a villanelle, so my opinion doesn't count for much at all yet. But I really love this. Thanks.
A moonlit friendship!! 🌗