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Beautiful! I really like your rhyme scheme in Making a Sunset :)

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Thank you, Sydney! I love me a classic, dense rhyme scheme... especially for sonnets! :)

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"whose edges fade to night" and that's how you make a sunset end. thanks

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Thanks a million, Weston :)

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Poems of close and loving observation.

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Many thanks! Wishing you a wonderful evening! :)

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Your imagery is rich as always, dear friend. I love reading them and being transported to a place where I can see them. Beautiful.

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I'm so glad they provide some transportation to our beautiful desert, dear Arjan! You need to return and see it again in person as I can only do so much with words! Many thanks--and thank you for featuring my post! :)

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