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William Diana's avatar

These are really beautiful haiku. So delicate that a single breath would displace the whole thing!

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Sunny M's avatar

Thank you very much!

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26thAvenuePoet (Elizabeth)'s avatar

Wonderful haiku. Wishing you more rain, more stars, more sonnets!

(P.S. Now I'm imagining your sonnets as a convocation of poets that someone's trying to get lined up and headed in the same direction. "I will in just a minute, but look at that...")

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Sunny M's avatar

Now I am seeing visions of poets lining up, each interested in something different... no wonder sonnet-writing is a challenge! XD

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